I Pretended My Niece Was My Daughter to Test My Fiancé — Part 2

“Test him how?”

“I’m going to tell him I have a daughter I never mentioned. Twenty-five years old. I want you to be her.”

She actually laughed.

“You want me to pretend to be your kid?”

“Just for an hour. Call me Mom. Sit with us. Watch him. Tell me what you see.”

The laugh faded.

“Okay. But Aunt Maggie, when this turns out to be nothing, you have to promise me you’ll let yourself be happy.”

“I promise.”

I told Richard the next evening, over a second glass of wine in my living room. I made my voice soft, almost guilty.

“There’s something I never told you. Before we get married, you need to know. I have a daughter.”

His face did something — just for a flicker. The smile froze, the eyes went still, and then everything snapped back into place like a curtain dropping.

“A daughter? Maggie, why would you hide that?”

“She’s 25. We had a falling out years ago. We’re talking again now.”

His shoulders dropped half an inch — I watched it happen.

“What caused the falling out?”

“It’s complicated. Old wounds. I’d rather not get into it tonight.”

He studied me for a beat longer than I liked.

“And does she know about me? About us?”

“A little. Not everything yet.”

“What’s her name?”

“Chloe,” I said.

“Chloe.” He turned the name over carefully. “Twenty-five,” he said again, almost to himself. “So she’s grown. Independent.”

“Yes.”

“Well.” He smiled, fully now. “That’s wonderful news. I would love to meet her.”

I poured myself more wine to keep my hands busy.

“How about Saturday? Coffee. Just the three of us.”

“Saturday is perfect.”

That Saturday, I sat in my car in the coffee shop parking lot for a full ten minutes before I could make myself get out. Through the window, I watched Richard walk in, scan the room, and pick a table near the back. He smoothed his collar twice.

Chloe’s car pulled in beside mine. She tapped on my window.

“You ready?”

I wasn’t. But I nodded anyway.

“Whatever happens in there,” I said quietly, “this is either going to save me or set me free.”

She squeezed my shoulder and waited for me to walk in first.

I sat for one more moment, gripping the steering wheel, and whispered to myself that I was about to find out exactly who I had almost married.

A few minutes later, Chloe walked through the door right on cue, her hair loose around her shoulders, a soft smile already in place. She crossed the coffee shop and leaned down to hug me.

“Hi, Mom,” she said warmly.

Richard stood so fast his chair scraped the floor. Something switched on behind his eyes, and a different version of him stepped forward.

“Richard, this is Chloe.”

“You must be the famous daughter,” he said, pulling out her chair himself. “Your mother didn’t tell me you were this lovely.”

Chloe gave a polite laugh and sat down. I tried to catch her eye, but Richard had already leaned toward her, elbows on the table, body angled away from me.

“What do you do, Chloe? Your mother’s been so secretive about you.”

“I work in marketing,” she said.

“Marketing. Smart girl. I bet you’re brilliant at it.”

I sipped my coffee and forced a smile.

“Richard, I was telling Chloe how you and I met at that gala.”

“Mhm,” he murmured, eyes still on her. Then, almost as an aside, he reached over and squeezed my wrist. “You’ve seemed tired this week, haven’t you, darling? I keep telling her work is getting to be too much.” He turned back to Chloe without waiting for an answer. “Chloe, tell me, do you live nearby? Do you see your mother often?”

“Pretty often,” she said carefully.

He nodded slowly, as if she had just handed him something useful.

I needed a moment to breathe — and to see what he would do with the space.

“I’ll be right back,” I said, pushing back my chair. “Restroom.”

Neither of them really looked up. But as I stood, I caught Chloe’s hand sliding off the table and into her lap, her phone already cupped against her thigh.

In the restroom, I ran the tap until it went cold, then splashed water on my face. I gripped the edge of the sink and stared at myself in the mirror for what felt like forever, wondering when exactly I had started looking tired to other people. I dried my hands slowly. I checked my lipstick.

I gave him every minute he needed.

I had barely stepped back into the hallway when my phone buzzed in my palm. Chloe’s name lit up the screen. Her message was three words, typed clumsily under the table.

“Come back now.”

My stomach dropped so hard I felt it in my knees. I turned the corner and walked back toward our table, certain I could end this with one sentence.

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